How will you react when you receive a gift you do not like?
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What else can you do even if you received the gift that you did not like? We all sometimes receive a bad gift, but that doesn't mean we have to make the gift giver feel bad too. It is rude and further can hurt the giver’s feelings if you express your feeling directly or indirectly that you do not like the gift. You should react politely and show your appreciation for gifts that we received regardless of whether you like them or not. In addition, you may need to pretend that you really like gifts to make him/her happy even though you do not, indeed. Try to smile and keep your voice pleasant. Do this by imagining you just received a present you love, and your voice will be convincing. You don't want to sound insincere or sarcastic. Life is like that. Life is not going as you wish. You might sometimes need to lie for a good reason and you might need to act as if you are an actor. One of the ways to minimize such cases is that you often tell your friends and family members what you like.
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Thank you for taking the time to write your opinion about the topic.
You were able to express yourself quite well in complex sentences.
I do have some minor corrections.
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I do agree with you that we sometimes have to pretend in life.
I just hope we don\'t have to do it very often. ^^
Teacher Nina^^
What else can you do even if you received the gift that you did not like?
We all sometimes receive a bad gift, but that doesn\'t mean we have to make the gift giver feel bad too.
>> correct
It is rude and further can hurt the giver’s feelings if you express your feeling directly or indirectly that you do not like the gift.
>> It is rude and can further hurt the giver\'s feeling if you express your feelings directly or indirectly that you do not like the gift.
You should react politely and show your appreciation for gifts that we received regardless of whether you like them or not.
>> You should react politely and show your appreciation for gifts that you receive regardless of whether you like them or not.
In addition, you may need to pretend that you really like gifts to make him/her happy even though you do not, indeed.
>> In addition, you may have to pretend that you really like the gift to make him/her happy even though you are not.
Try to smile and keep your voice pleasant.
>> correct
Do this by imagining you just received a present you love, and your voice will be convincing.
>> correct
You don\'t want to sound insincere or sarcastic.
>> correct
Life is like that.
>> correct
Life is not going as you wish.
>> correct
You might sometimes need to lie for a good reason and you might need to act as if you are an actor.
>> correct
>> OR: You might sometimes need to tell a lie for a good reason and you might need to act as if you are an actor too.
One of the ways to minimize such cases is that you often tell your friends and family members what you like.
>> But one of the ways to minimize such case is to often tell your friends and family members what you like.
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