How would the world be different if we never considered beauty?
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Hi Ye Na,
Thank you for doing your homework! I\'m impressed with the way you expressed your understanding of the \"beauty of the world\" as the beauty of nature. You\'ve highlighted an important issue of reducing debris and improving our environment. Your thoughts on the impact of human consideration on the color of the sky and the pollution of the ocean are insightful. It\'s evident that you\'ve done your research and understand the vulnerability of the Antarctic region. Your assignment shows a strong awareness of the potential dangers associated with neglecting the beauty of this area. Well done on a thoughtful and well-written piece of work!
~Teacher Cathy
First of all, my understanding \"beauty of
the world\" in the sentence is the beauty of nature.
>>First of all, my understanding of the \"beauty of
the world\" in the sentence refers to the beauty of nature.
Nowadays peoples are efforts to reduce debris and
make better nature.
>>Nowadays, people are making efforts
to reduce debris and improve nature.
If humans do not consider beauty, the sky isn\'t
becoming blue anymore.
>>CORRECT
OR>>If humans do not appreciate
beauty, the sky will no longer be blue.
Already sky isn\'t blue, many days sky is gray
because of smoke.
>>The sky is already not blue; many days it appears gray
due to smoke.
In my research background, we talk about the
pollution of the ocean.
>>CORRECT
The Antarctic is a beautiful but very weak place
because of very vulnerable place.
>>CORRECT The Antarctic is a stunning
but extremely fragile place.
If humans never consider the beauty of this
region, the world will be very dangerous because of heavy ice melting.
>>CORRECT
OR>>If humans fail to appreciate the beauty of this region, the world will become very dangerous due to accelerated ice melting.
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