How would you define success?
학생이 쓴 원문
My definition for success is being recognized as a professional person in my field.
Especially I feel successful when people who are around me think I am good at things that I would like to be professional. It could be Art or a position I work.
If people are not satisfied with my outcome, I feel very stressful and try to my best to resolve the problem.
On the other hand If people like the things what I have done for them or give me compliment on my art works , I feel peace in mind and think I can do better.
강사 첨삭
Hi Sarah!^^
I think everyone has a different definition of the word success.
None the less, all I hope is for the both of us to be successful@^^
See you tomorrow!^^
~~T. Andrea
My definition for success is being recognized as a professional person in my field.
>>> My definition for success is being recognized as a professional in my own field.
Especially I feel successful when people who are around me think I am good at things that I would like to be professional.
>>> I feel successful especially when people think that I\'m good at things.
It could be Art or a position I work.
>>> It\'s either about arts or a position I\'m working for.
If people are not satisfied with my outcome, I feel very stressful and try to my best to resolve the problem.
>>> If people are not satisfied with the outcome, I feel very stressed and I try my best to resolve the problem.
On the other hand If people like the things what I have done for them or give me compliment on my art works , I feel peace in mind and think I can do better.
>>> On the other hand, if people like the things I have done for them or give me compliments for my art works, I have a peace of mind and thinks that I can do better.
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