How would you describe a healthy diet?
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The most important thing is to avoid unhealthy food. It includes food that is greasy or sweet. Also, you have to eat appropriate amount of food. It is not good to eat too much or too less. It is also good to eat at a regular time. Especially, you have to avoid eating at night. Our body needs various kinds of nutrients, so try to eat evenly.
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Also, you have to eat appropriate amount of food. It is not good to eat too much or too less.
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It is also good to eat at a regular time.
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Especially, you have to avoid eating at night.
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Our body needs various kinds of nutrients, so try to eat evenly.
>> Our body needs various kinds of nutrients, so try to balance your food.
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