How would you describe a perfect weekend?
학생이 쓴 원문
1. when I got enough sleep and had a good dream.
2. when I woke up, I feel softy blanket and warm sunshine.
3. when I stand after stretch.
4. When I drinking cold water.
5. When I cleaning in my home when sunny day.
6. When I have lunch that my mom made dish after take a shower.
7. When I walking on the street and listen to my favorite song.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this [이름] [이름]. Sounds like a perfect weekend to me too.
1. when I got enough sleep and had a good dream.
>>> OR: When I get enough sleep and have a good dream.
2. when I woke up, I feel softy blanket and warm sunshine.
2. when I woke up, I feel softy blanket and warm sunshine.
>>> When I woke up and I feel a soft blanket and the warm sunshine.
3. when I stand after stretch.
>>> When I stand after I stretch.
>>> OR: When I stand after stretching.
4. When I drinking cold water.
4. When I drinking cold water.
>>> When I drink cold water.
5. When I cleaning in my home when sunny day.
5. When I cleaning in my home when sunny day.
>>> When I am cleaning in my home on a sunny day.
6. When I have lunch that my mom made dish after take a shower.
>>> When I have lunch that my mom made after taking a shower.
7. When I walking on the street and listen to my favorite song.
>>> When I am walking on the street and listening to my favorite song.
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