How would you describe a perfect weekend?
학생이 쓴 원문
A perfect weekend for me will have my own time. If I have my own time, I will spend time with my best friends. It will be fun if I have brunch with them and gossiping with them. Also I want to go to good condition hotel with them. I will swim in the pool at daytime, and order some foods and wines on the bed at night. We will going to chatter away happily for all night until sleep.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Elina! Thank you for making your composition. I hope I can try the cold noodles. I like Korean black soybean noodles. Always be careful!~ T. Lyn
I would recommend called \"naengmyeon\" which is a cold noodles.
>>Correct. I recommend the naengmyeon (cold noodles).
Because a soup of naengmyeon isn\'t spicy, everyone can enjoy it, but also you can flavor with spicy souse and vinegar.
>>Naengmyeon\'s broth is not spicy , so anyone can enjoy it, but it is also seasoned with spicy sauce and vinegar.
It\'s flavor is depend on you.
>>Its flavor is up to you.
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