How would you describe a very relaxing vacation?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think I can relax myself only when I can forget all about myself such as my family and work. If someone wants a real relaxing vacation, he or she sometimes lies low for a while without receiving any contact.
If you can\'t do as above, you can enjoy a real relaxing holidays by focusing on one thing such as sports or movies that you like.
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Hi, Steve! Thank you for answering
your homework. I hope you could have a very relaxing vacation soon.
Please take note of the corrections.
- Debbie
>> I think I can only relax if I forget about my responsibilities, such as family and work.
If you can\'t do as above, you can enjoy a real relaxing holidays by focusing on one thing such as sports or movies that you like.
If someone wants a real relaxing vacation, he or she sometimes lies low for a while without receiving any contact.
>> If someone wants a real relaxing vacation, he or she sometimes avoids others for a while.
If you can\'t do as above, you can enjoy a real relaxing holidays by focusing on one thing such as sports or movies that you like.
>> If you can\'t do the things above, you can enjoy a real relaxing holiday by focusing on one thing such as playing sports or watching movies that you like.
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