How would you describe "positive discrimination"?
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I think positive discrimination is good.
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I’ve never thought about positive discrimination.
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However, I think that some favors given to those who are the poor, the under-privileged and vulnerable to shocks or poverty could be regarded as positive discrimination.
>> However, I think that some favors given to those who are poor, the under-privileged and vulnerable to shocks or poverty could be regarded as positive discrimination.
>> In my opinion, favors given to those who are poor, the under-privileged and vulnerable to shocks or poverty are considered positive discrimination.
For instance, the Korean government offers a job or on-the-job training to migrant works although it won’t for local residents.
>> Did you mean: For instance, the Korean government offers a job or on-the-job training to migrant workers although they didn\'t do the same thing for local residents.
>> For instance, the Korean government offers a job or on-the-job training to migrant workers although it should be for the local residents.
Free lunch boxes are delivered to the elderly who are living by themselves without any support from their family.
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>> Free lunch boxes are given to the elderly who are living by themselves without receiving any support from their family.
The students who survived from the tragic Ferry accident that happened in April 2014 and left more than 300 high school students who were on the school field trip dead could go to college with less severe qualifications in accordance with the new law that has been legislated to give them a special treatment compared with regular students.
>> The students who survived from the tragic Ferry accident that happened in April 2014 could go to college with less severe qualifications in accordance with the new law that has been legislated to give them a special treatment compared with regular students.
Each university has been given a quota to accept the students once they meet the minimum requirements considering the psychological shock and time they lost on studying.
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