How would you describe the difference between a vice and an addiction?
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They are about same, but they have different things.
>>They are almost the same, buth they have differences.
Vice is based action, and addiction is based object.
>>A vice is based on an action while an addiction is on an object.
I think stopping vice is more difficult than stopping addiction.
>>I think stopping a vice is more difficult than stopping an addiction.
Being addiction needs something, but vice doesn\'t need anything.
>>When you are addictd to something, you need to have it badly. On the other hand, a vice doesn\'t need anything badly but you should do it to feel satisfied.
I could stop to addiction of sugar and alcohol, but I can\'t stop my vice which is biting nail yet.
>>I could stop my addiction to sugar and alcohol, but I can\'t stop my vice which is nail biting.
I have addict my vice for twenty years.
>>I have been addicted to my vice for 20 years.
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