How would you describe your bestfriend and what are the activities that you love doing together?

The question is very familiar to me. One of my bestfriend, called Sue, is very smart and beautiful. Whenever I see her, she looks intelligent and noble person. Her appeareance is fairly good looking and at the same time, the way of her speaking is educated and she makes people smile with a good sense of humor. We have same taste of buying clothes. When the clothes shops are on clearance sale, we take a one day off and buy many clothes. At that time, we wear it,give evalution each other, and bargain it with shop manager. At the end of shopping, we have delicious meals together and make arrangement another buying.

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The question is very familiar to me.
>>CORRECT

One of my bestfriend, called Sue, is very smart and beautiful.
>>One of my best friends,named Sue, is very smart and beautiful.

Whenever I see her, she looks intelligent and noble person.
>>Whenever I see her, she looks intelligent and noble.
OR>> She looks an intelligent and noble person.

Her appeareance is fairly good looking and at the same time, the way of her speaking is educated and she makes people smile with a good sense of humor.
>>Her appearance is fairly good looking and at the same time, the way she speaks is educated and she makes people smile with her good sense of humor.

We have same taste of buying clothes.
>>We have the same taste in buying clothes.

When the clothes shops are on clearance sale, we take a one day off and buy many clothes.
>> When the clothes shops are on clearance sale, we take a day off and buy many clothes.

 At that time, we wear it,give evalution each other, and bargain it with shop manager.
>> At that time, we wear it,give an evaluation to each other, and bargain it with shop manager.
OR>> A synonym of bargain is HAGGLE

 At the end of shopping, we have delicious meals together and make arrangement another buying.
>> At the end of shopping, we have delicious meals together and make another arrangement to shop again.