How would you describe your experience of having children?
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Good afternoon, Sir [이름]!
Happy Monday. ^^
Thank you for sharing your experience of having a child.
I appreciate it a lot.
Have a great day.
Teacher Nina
When my wife gave my daughter a birth, I appreciated God for having a baby and was delighted because we’ve been waiting for it for a long time since we got married.
>> When my wife gave birth to my daughter, I appreciated God for having a baby and was delighted because we’ve been waiting for it for a long time since we got married.
I actually did not contemplate having children and just thought it as a social norm and a natural thing.
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However, as I raise my daughter, I become realize that having a child requires more burden and responsibility as a parent.
>> However, as I raise my daughter, I realized that having a child requires more burden and responsibility as a parent.
Obviously now I cannot think of my life without my daughter because my life becomes much richer in term of at least emotional perspective and happier.
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She gives me a joy and is a reason for my hard work.
>> She gives me job and reason to work hard.
Moreover, people’s marriage won’t last long unless they have children.
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When they have been married for many years, they become losing interest on their spouses and their love will cool down to the level of showing indifference to each other.
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Parenting changes you.
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People expect this, but they don’t expect just how radically it would.
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Your life gets realigned to one single creatuer, your child.
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