How would you describe your previous job as a real estate agent?
학생이 쓴 원문
I met various oeopele there from my work. The job was usually need a tention and concenntration
sinec there is a trade much money and property. I loved my job
강사 첨삭
Hello, Jumi! I guess you have absolutely loved your job in the past, Hopefully, you could find a part-time job related to it. Goodluck! Happy weekend! ^^
~T. Jewel
I met various oeopele there from my work.
>>I met various people from my work.
The job was usually need a tention and concenntration sinec there is a trade much money and property.
>>The job usually required a lot of attention and concentration, since it involved handling significant amounts of money and property.
I loved my job
>> I loved my job!
OR
>>I truly enjoyed my job!
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