How would you describe yourself to someone who hasn’t met you?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I express myself to others, I would like to introduce myself as a comfortable person. When I talk to people, I usually listen to other people\'s stories and give them advice. I don\'t know why, but it\'s more comfortable to listen to others than to talk about me. And I introduce myself as a person who likes to exercise and play games. I like sports and games since I was young, so I have many memories with my friends.
강사 첨삭
Hi Steve! We need to introduce ourselves to new people every now and then. It\'s part of socializing. We should introduce ourselves with confidence and wit to make good impressions. :)
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When I talk to people, I usually listen to other people\'s stories and give them advice. I don\'t know why, but it\'s more comfortable to listen to others than to talk about me.
>> When I talk to people, I usually listen to their stories and give them advice. I don\'t know why but it\'s more comfortable to listen to others than to talk about me.
And I introduce myself as a person who likes to exercise and play games.
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I like sports and games since I was young, so I have many memories with my friends.
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