How would you feel and react if you woke up one morning in a stranger\'s house?

2023-04-11 · 첨삭 강사 Harmony

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I feel awful and scared. I don\'t have any information about that house, and I don\'t know where I am. Also, if I wake up in a stranger\'s house, I think that stranger thinks I am a stranger. He or she may think I am a thief or invader. But then if house owners wake up and see me, I will explain what happened to me and say endless sorry to them. Because whether I am in another\'s house without any intention, it\'s my responsibility. But I will beg them to not call and report to the police since it was a situation without my intention. Ummm... I am sorry Ms. [Name]; but: this question doesn\'t make sense to write many things... I have no ideas... I am sorry..!

강사 첨삭

Alright! You still did well in explaining the way you would handle the situation.  I understand that you were probably astounded by the question, but since the topic was very lighthearted, I thought what better way to ask you than to match the energy of the article?  While it understandably didn\'t make sense for you, I still appreciate your effort to still give me your thoughts.  Thanks!! :))
~T.Harmony <3

I feel awful and scared. 
>> CORRECT!
OR>> I would feel awful and scared. (Since we are discussing the possibility of it happening. ^^)
I don\'t have any information about that house, and I don\'t know where I am. 
>> CORRECT!
Also, if I wake up in a stranger\'s house, I think that stranger thinks I am a stranger.
>> ...I think that they would see me as a stranger.
He or she may think I am a thief or invader. 
>> CORRECT!
But then if house owners wake up and see me, I will explain what happened to me and say endless sorry to them. 
>> ...and endlessly apologize to them.
Because whether I am in another\'s house without any intention, it\'s my responsibility. 
>> Because whether I am in another\'s house without any intention or not,...
But I will beg them to not call and report to the police since it was a situation without my intention.
>> CORRECT!

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