How would you feel if the price of liquor doubled?
학생이 쓴 원문
I very would be get angry! They cheat me, so i never forgive them, i would fight to give back the price. Actually, I have encountered these situation during travel in oher countries. They think that foreigners are pushover for them. Especially, it usually happens in the poor countries. These kinds of bars, where the price of doubled, have a something in common(same feather). They tempt customers by sexy girls and luxury equipments, sofa, cup, light and so on.. If you want to avoid double price of liquor, keep my tip in your mind.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Thanks for the tip. To be honest, I would also be angry if this happens. I think it is not fair for them to do that to other people. Well, anyway, I haven't experienced this one yet so thank you for warning me. I would be careful. See you tomorrow!
Teacher Faye
Here are your corrections:
I very would be get angry!
>>I would be very angry!
They cheat me, so i never forgive them, i would fight to give back the price.
>>They cheated on me so I will never forgive them. I would fight to let them bring the price back.
Actually, I have encountered these situation during travel in oher countries.
>>Actually, I encountered this situation when I was travelling to other countries.
They think that foreigners are pushover for them.
>>They think that foreigners are a pushover for them.
Especially, it usually happens in the poor countries.
>>This usually happens to the poor countries.
These kinds of bars, where the price of doubled, have a something in common(same feather).
>>These bars who double the prices of liquor have something in common (same feather).
They tempt customers by sexy girls and luxury equipments, sofa, cup, light and so on..
>>They tempt customers with sexy girls and luxury equipments, sofa, cup, light and so on..
If you want to avoid double price of liquor, keep my tip in your mind.
>>Correct!
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