How would you feel if there weren’t any holidays?

2022-04-06 · 첨삭 강사 Caitlyn

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How would you feel if there weren’t any holidays? If there is no any holidays, I would be already dead. Even if I\'m a student, so there are more freedom than the those who have a job, but it isn\'t enough for me to have a good time. I could be dead. I cannot imagine when I have a job. I saw my parents get up early to work out, so it made me think It\'s too hard. Holidays are precious things. we can spend time with our family by traveling etc. No vacation, no life. Also, Most of holidays have meanings, so we can celebrate that day. Some holidays have historical meanings, and some holidays is global(or international), so we can celebrate it with people all over the world. For example, there is a Chirstmas!

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Hi, [이름] Su!
Thank you for doing your homework. I agree with you when you said that holidays are important because it gives us time to travel and be with our family.
-T.Caitlyn
How would you feel if there weren’t any holidays?
>>CORRECT
If there is no any holidays, I would be already dead. 
>>If there are no holidays, I think I would already be dead.
Even if I\'m a student, so there are more freedom than the those who have a job, but it isn\'t enough for me to have a good time. 
>>As a student, I have more freedom than those who have jobs but still it\'s not enough to have a good time.
I could be dead.
>>It makes me feel like dying.
I cannot imagine when I have a job.
>>OR: What more if I already have a job?
I saw my parents get up early to work out, so it made me think It\'s too hard. 
>>I saw my parents getting up early to go to work and it made me think that it\'s too hard.
Holidays are precious things. 
>>Holidays are precious.
we can spend time with our family by traveling etc. 
>>CORRECT
No vacation, no life.
>>CORRECT
Also, Most of holidays have meanings, so we can celebrate that day. 
>>Also, most holidays are celebrated because they have a special meaning.
Some holidays have historical meanings, and some holidays is global(or international), 
>>Some holidays are part of our history, and some are celebrated world wide.
so we can celebrate it with people all over the world. 
>>CORRECT
For example, there is a Chirstmas!
>>An example would be Christmas.

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