How would you feel if your boyfriend/husband/girlfriend/wife sold his organ just to buy you somethin
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I will very thanksful to him or her.
I can't descripe how him or her thanksful.
Actually now I/m experiencing it similarly.
2Days ago my girl friend said to me.
I wish you will be the last man in my life.
No sooner listen her speak than I felt that should be more careful for her.
It is mome shocked because I havn't been got that love in my life.
I was so thanksful to her and I'm promised to myself that I will be more shine the gril.
After that I'm very love her and I'm sacrifice me for her.
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GOOD MORNING, VINCENT!
Thank you for putting so much time and effort once again in finishing your homework.
You are such a romantic sometimes.
Though I\'m not so sure I got what you mean.
I hope I did a good job with this.
Take care!
I will very thanksful to him or her.
>>I will be very thankful/grateful to her.I can\'t descripe how him or her thanksful.
>>I can\'t describe how thankful I am to her.Actually now I/m experiencing it similarly.>>Actually, I am now experiencing something similar to that.
2Days ago my girl friend said to me. I wish you will be the last man in my life.
>>2 days ago, my girlfriend said that she wishes me to be the last man in her life.No sooner listen her speak than I felt that should be more careful for her.
>>No sooner when I heard her speak that I felt like I should take care of her more.It is mome shocked because I havn\'t been got that love in my life.
>>It\'s more of a shock because I never experienced this kind of love my entire life.I was so thanksful to her and I\'m promised to myself that I will be more shine the gril.
>>I was so thankful to her and I promised myself that I will (shine?) more for her.After that I\'m very love her and I\'m sacrifice me for her.
>>After that I\'m so inlove with her and I will sacrifice everything for her.
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