How would you feel if your company asked you to move to a different country to help your career?

2015-06-12 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I’ve always wanted to work abroad. It was my dream since I started my career after graduating from college. I have actually sought a job in other counties, although my efforts have not paid off. Unless you have special skills or expertise in a particular field, which is required in a foreign country, the change of landing a job abroad is very slim. The reasons behind for my wish to work abroad is that I need to experience diverse cultures and people, so I could have much deeper and broader understanding of them. Moreover, I can improve my communication skills. On top of that, I wish that my daughter gets education where competition is not that fierce. She can have more time to play with her friends. The pros that I am thinking now might not be true because some people say that it is not nearly as easy as it seems. In reality, I might encounter so many challenges such as financial problems, language barriers, cultural conflicts, racial discrimination, etc.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Sir [이름]!!!!

T.G.I.F!!!!

Yes, you are right.

It is difficult to find a job overseas.

I think it is really important to have special skills nowadays.

Have a great day.

Teacher Nina


I’ve always wanted to work abroad.

>> Correct

It was my dream since I started my career after graduating from college.

>> Correct

>> OR: It was what I wished for since I started my career after graduating from college.

I have actually sought a job in other counties, although my efforts have not paid off.

>> Did you mean: I have actually sought for a job in other countries, but my efforts didn\'t pay off.

Unless you have special skills or expertise in a particular field, which is required in a foreign country, the change of landing a job abroad is very slim.

>> Correct

>> OR: Unless you have special skills or expertise in a particular field, which is required in a foreign country. Having a job abroad is very slim.

The reasons behind my wish to work abroad is that I need to experience diverse cultures and people, so I could have much deeper and broader understanding of them.

>> Correct

Moreover, I can improve my communication skills.

>> Correct

On top of that, I wish that my daughter gets education where competition is not that fierce.

>> Correct

She can have more time to play with her friends.

>> Correct

The pros that I am thinking now might not be true because some people say that it is not nearly as easy as it seems.

>> Correct

In reality, I might encounter so many challenges such as financial problems, language barriers, cultural conflicts, racial discrimination, etc.

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