How would you help someone overcome his fears?
학생이 쓴 원문
If someone request to help me overcoming his fears, I will help as much as I can.
If someone want to break fear memory, someone have to adapt his fear.
I think It\'s only one solution.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]. Thank you for always answering your homework. Keep it up and see you tomorrow! ^_^
-T. Julia
If someone request to help me overcoming his fears, I will help as much as I can.
>> If someone requests help in overcoming their fears, I will help them as much as I can.
If someone want to break fear memory, someone have to adapt his fear.
>> If someone wants to overcome a fear memory, they have to adapt to their fear.
I think It\'s only one solution.
>> I think It\'s the only solution.
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