How would you help someone to get over their fear?
학생이 쓴 원문
In my opinion, we need to help him to forget the memory.
If we make a lot of good and happy memories, then even though the fear is strong, we can beat it.
Because of this reason, I think we need to make them a lot of good memories forget it.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
I agree with you. Replacing the fear with good memories is good. See you in our next class! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>In my opinion, we need to help him forget the memory.
If we make a lot of good and happy memories, then even though the fear is strong, we can beat it.
If we make a lot of good and happy memories, then even though the fear is strong, we can beat it.
>>CORRECT!
Because of this reason, I think we need to make them a lot of good memories forget it.
Because of this reason, I think we need to make them a lot of good memories forget it.
>>Because of this reason, I think we need to give them a lot of good memories to forget it.
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