How would you help someone to get over their fear?
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The best way to help someone get over their fear is to listen to what they say. Try to identify with hem/her together what is the root of her/her fear. What is he/she really scared of? Become an observer of his/her inner space and ask him/her a few simple questions while focusing on his/her fear. The problem is that most people cling to their fears. Let him/her return to his/her daily routines. Letting him/her work is one of the best ways of dealing with his/her fears, anxieties, and worries. If he/she goes for nothing else on this list of cures, make him go for the Work. It will rock his/her world. Hypnosis also can help. With hypnosis, he/she can program the right thoughts into his/her mind and eliminate negative beliefs. He/she can use it to consistently evoke positive change in his/her life. Getting fears down on paper is important, because trying to think them through never works. Talking helps. Let him talk a lot. Realize that reality isn’t nearly as bad as his imagination.
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T.G.I.F Sir [이름]!
Happy Halloween too.Thanks again for enrolling here at Power English and for being my student.
Our class always gives me energy to go through the day.I admire your opinions. We should really help those people who can\'t get over their fear.
Talk to you soon.
Teacher Nina
The best way to help someone get over their fear is to listen to what they say.
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>> OR: The best way to help someone get over their fear is to listen to what his/her say.
Try to identify with hem/her together what is the root of her/her fear.
>> Try to identify with him/her together what is the root of his/her fear.
What is he/she really scared of?
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Become an observer of his/her inner space and ask him/her a few simple questions while focusing on his/her fear.
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The problem is that most people cling to their fears.
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Let him/her return to his/her daily routines.
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Letting him/her work is one of the best ways of dealing with his/her fears, anxieties, and worries.
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If he/she goes for nothing else on this list of cures, make him go for the Work.
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It will rock his/her world.
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Hypnosis also can help.
>> Hypnosis can also help.
With hypnosis, he/she can program the right thoughts into his/her mind and eliminate negative beliefs.
>> Correct
He/she can use it to consistently evoke positive change in his/her life.
>> Correct
Getting fears down on paper is important, because trying to think them through never works.
>> Did you mean: Getting fears down on paper is important, because trying to think about them never works.
Talking helps.
>> Correct
Let him talk a lot.
>> Correct
Realize that reality isn’t nearly as bad as his imagination.
>> Let him realize that reality isn\'t nearly as bad as his imagination.
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