How would you help someone to get over their fear?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the best way to overcome the fear is to help people not to feel that emotion as fear wanting to avoid but as a barrier to overcome. If someone feels fear, I want to explain why you are feeling fear and provide them some advises to get through the fear. And I want to encourage them with cheerful words that don't need to feel fear and also can say do not worry and all things are going well. I also can make some jokes to release their nervousness. And I could share my experiences about similar situations but overcame it.
강사 첨삭
Hi Sarah!^^
Fears are really hard to overcome without any support from anyone! I afraid of heights but I tried cliff jumping! I was really scared at fist but my what I was thinking on that very moment was that, that is a once in a lifetime experience so I have to do it. I counted from 1 to 10, then jumped! :) Good thing I was wearing a life vest so I am still alive!^^
~~T. Andrea
I think the best way to overcome the fear is to help people not to feel that emotion as fear wanting to avoid but as a barrier to overcome.
>> I think the best way to overcome fear is to help that person realize that fear is not something that you want to avoid but it is a barrier for you to overcome.
If someone feels fear, I want to explain why you are feeling fear and provide them some advises to get through the fear.
>> If someone feels scared, I want to explain the reason why they feel scared and give them some advises to ht through their fear.
And I want to encourage them with cheerful words that don\'t need to feel fear and also can say do not worry and all things are going well.
>> And I want to encourage them with cheerful words that don\'t need to feel scared and I can also say that they do not need to be worried since everything is going well.
I also can make some jokes to release their nervousness.
>> I also can make some jokes to lessen their nervousness.
And I could share my experiences about similar situations but overcame it.
>> Lastly, I could share my experiences about similar situations and how I was able to overcome them.
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