How would you like to be assisted when you got some problems with some services you paid for?
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Before I write, I\'m sorry that I don\'t answer the question you give me for homework. I kept thinking about the question But really I don\'t remember that experiences. So I answer the another homework sentence.
The last time. I bought the earring from the internet shopping mall. They delivered that product the next day. It was very fast. But, I disappointed when I opened the box. Because there wasn\'t anything in the box. Actually there was only a wrapping paper in the box. There was no earring. I guessed when they packed the product. It was slipped out of the paper. So just the only a wrapping paper was in the box.
Next day, I wrote that in to an inquiry board. And they give an answer. They would check the stock and they said they would answer again. But, a week has passed. They didn\'t give me the answer. So I was very angry. ultimately I called that shopping mall. And I requested that give solution right now. Funnily enough, when I got angry, they sent the earring right away.
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Hello [이름] [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework today. Read and repeat the correct sentences so you will be able to remember them as you speak. ^_^
~T. Maine
>>Before I write, I\'m sorry for not answering the questions you gave me for my homework.
I kept thinking about the question
>>Correct.
But really I don\'t remember that experiences.
>>But I really don\'t remember any experience.
So I answer the another homework sentence.
>>So I answer the other homework.
The last time.
>>So I answer the other homework.
The last time.
>> I choose the last one.
I bought the earring from the internet shopping mall.
>> I bought a pair of earrings online.
They delivered that product the next day.
>> They delivered that product the next day.
It was very fast.
>> It was very fast.
But, I disappointed when I opened the box.
>>But, I was disappointed when I opened the box.
Because there wasn\'t anything in the box.
>> It is because there wasn\'t anything inside.
Actually there was only a wrapping paper in the box.
>>Actually, there was only a wrapper in the box.
There was no earring.
>>Correct.
I guessed when they packed the product.
>> I guess when they packed the product,
It was slipped out of the paper.
>>it slipped out of paper.
So just the only a wrapping paper was in the box.
>>So it was just the wrapper that was inside the box.
Next day, I wrote that in to an inquiry board.
Next day, I wrote that in to an inquiry board.
>> The next day, I sent a complaint to the inquiry board.
And they give an answer.
>>And they gave a reply.
They would check the stock and they said they would answer again.
>>They would check the stock and said they would answer me back.
But, a week has passed.
>>But a week has passed.
They didn\'t give me the answer.
>>They didn\'t give me any answer.
So I was very angry. ultimately I called that shopping mall.
>> So I was very angry so I called the shopping mall.
And I requested that give solution right now.
>>I requested that they give me a solution right away.
Funnily enough, when I got angry, they sent the earring right away.
>> Funnily when I got angry, they send the earring right away.
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