How would you like to be assisted when you got some problems with some services you paid for?

2022-06-29 · 첨삭 강사 Maine

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Before I write, I\'m sorry that I don\'t answer the question you give me for homework. I kept thinking about the question But really I don\'t remember that experiences. So I answer the another homework sentence. The last time. I bought the earring from the internet shopping mall. They delivered that product the next day. It was very fast. But, I disappointed when I opened the box. Because there wasn\'t anything in the box. Actually there was only a wrapping paper in the box. There was no earring. I guessed when they packed the product. It was slipped out of the paper. So just the only a wrapping paper was in the box. Next day, I wrote that in to an inquiry board. And they give an answer. They would check the stock and they said they would answer again. But, a week has passed. They didn\'t give me the answer. So I was very angry. ultimately I called that shopping mall. And I requested that give solution right now. Funnily enough, when I got angry, they sent the earring right away.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름] [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework today.  Read and repeat the correct sentences so you will be able to remember them as you speak.  ^_^


~T. Maine


Before I write, I\'m sorry that I don\'t answer the question you give me for homework. 
>>Before I write, I\'m sorry for not answering the questions you gave me for my homework. 
I kept thinking about the question 
>>Correct. 
But really I don\'t remember that experiences. 
>>But I really don\'t remember any experience. 
So I answer the another homework sentence.
>>So I answer the other homework. 
The last time. 
>> I choose the last one. 
I bought the earring from the internet shopping mall. 
>> I bought a pair of earrings online.
They delivered that product the next day. 
>> They delivered that product the next day. 
It was very fast. 
>> It was very fast. 
But, I disappointed when I opened the box. 
>>But, I was disappointed when I opened the box. 
Because there wasn\'t anything in the box. 
>> It is because there wasn\'t anything inside. 
Actually there was only a wrapping paper in the box. 
>>Actually,  there was only a wrapper in the box. 
There was no earring. 
>>Correct. 
I guessed when they packed the product. 
>> I guess when they packed the product,
It was slipped out of the paper. 
>>it slipped out of paper. 
So just the only a wrapping paper was in the box.
>>So it was just the wrapper that was inside the box. 
Next day, I wrote that in to an inquiry board. 
>> The next day, I sent a complaint to the inquiry board.  
And they give an answer. 
>>And they gave a reply. 
They would check the stock and they said they would answer again. 
>>They would check the stock and said they would answer me back. 
But, a week has passed. 
>>But a week has passed. 
They didn\'t give me the answer. 
>>They didn\'t give me any answer. 
So I was very angry. ultimately I called that shopping mall. 
>> So I was very angry so I called the shopping mall. 
And I requested that give solution right now. 
>>I requested that they give me a solution right away. 
Funnily enough, when I got angry, they sent the earring right away.
>> Funnily when I got angry, they send the earring right away. 

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