How would you like to be identified?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to be introduce by someone steadily growing person.
I think establish one\'s life is very important So I try to believe me and try hard my life.
I think there are a lot of things for our age(teenager, twenty\'s, thirty) in our life.
Many experience growing me up. That\'s very interesting and I feel satisfy.
So I try to enjoy my life and grow me up!
강사 첨삭
Good day, Angela!
Thank you for this. People will introduce you to how they know you which makes a good introduction and creates a good impression.
Have a nice day!
Aki~
I want to be introduce by someone steadily growing person.
>>> I want to be introduced by someone who is a steadily growing person.
I think establish one\'s life is very important So I try to believe me and try hard my life.
>>>I think establishing one\'s life is very important So I try to believe in myself and try hard in my life.
I think there are a lot of things for our age(teenager, twenty\'s, thirty) in our life.
>>>I think there are a lot of things for our age(teenager, twenty, thirty) in our life.
Many experience growing me up. That\'s very interesting and I feel satisfy.
>>> Many experiences helped me grow up. That\'s very interesting and I feel satisfied.
So I try to enjoy my life and grow me up!
>>> So I try to enjoy my life and grow up!
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