How would you like to hang out with your loved ones or friends?
학생이 쓴 원문
I had spent 21 years for playing table tennis with my friends.
So I usually spend with my friends if I have time.
and my degree in table tennis side is high level.
I had been took part in the major game which is organized by the city.
and many high level players were attended.
There are some silver, gold medals in my rooms.
Sometimes i think that I am very proud of myself.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Jack!
Thank you for making your homework.
It\'s good to know that you\'re able to enjoy tennis with your friends.
I think that is really valuable. ^^
By the way, here\'s a tip:
When you use \'been\' in your sentence, the verb that you will use should be in -ing form.
Example:
I had been taking part in the game.
I have been sleeping.
She has been donating.
~Teacher Gina
I had spent 21 years for playing table tennis with my friends.
>> CORRECT.
So I usually spend with my friends if I have time.>>So I usually spend time with my friends if I have time.
>> Or: So I usually spend time with my friends when I\'m available.
and my degree in table tennis side is high level.
and my degree in table tennis side is high level.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I have a high level degree in tennis.
I had been took part in the major game which is organized by the city.
I had been took part in the major game which is organized by the city.
>> I had took part in the major game which was organized by the city.
>> Or: I participated in the major game organized by the city.
and many high level players were attended.
and many high level players were attended.
>>And many high level players attended.
There are some silver, gold medals in my rooms.
There are some silver, gold medals in my rooms.
>> CORRECT.
Sometimes i think that I am very proud of myself.
Sometimes i think that I am very proud of myself.
>> CORRECT.
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