How would you like to spend your day? Describe it in five sentences.
학생이 쓴 원문
I want my parents to take a day off from the store, and I want to see all the Descendants of the Sun.And I want to go to Mt. Halla in Jeju Island.I want to play with my friends at Shinhwa Theme Park and sleep with them.I want to watch a movie while having a pajama party together.Then you\'ll have a day is over.
강사 첨삭
Hello Su A ,
Thank you for taking time to answer this question. It only proves that you really wanted to improve in your English skill. Please do check and take note of the corrections for your improvement. I hope it helped you.
Keep up the good work!
Sincerely,
Teacher Annie (^^)
How would you like to spend your day? Describe it in five sentences.
I want my parents to take a day off from the store, and I want to see all the Descendants of the Sun.
>>> I want my parents to take a day off from the store, and I want to see the cast of Descendants of the Sun.
And I want to go to Mt. Halla in Jeju Island. I want to play with my friends at Shinhwa Theme Park and sleep with them.
>>> Moreover, I want to go to Halla Mountain in Jeju Island. I want to play with my friends at Shinhwa Theme Park and sleep with them.
I want to watch a movie while having a pajama party together.
>>> CORRECT
Then you\'ll have a day is over.
>>> That\'s how I would like to spend my day.
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