How would you like to spend your vacation?
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'d like to travel to Fukuoka in Japan with my old friend for a hot spring resort. I will make a schedule for summer vacation with him next time. So I have to make much money a lot. :)
강사 첨삭
Hi Elic!
That sounds fun! Tell me all about it after your trip! :)
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I\'d like to travel to Fukuoka in Japan with my old friend for a hot spring resort.
>> I\'d like to travel to Fukuoka in Japan with my old friend and visit a hot spring resort.
I will make a schedule for summer vacation with him next time.
>> CORRECT
So I have to make much money a lot. :)
>> So I need to save a lot of money for this.
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