How would you like to spend your weekend if you were given the chance to get what you want?
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If I can make a plan for weekend what I want to do, and I have abilities to execute the plan. I would buy a small house in country side. I would go to the house every weekends. I want to spend time alone in the house. After having the house, I will live diligently in week days, and then I want to stay alone in every weekend. There are a desktop computer, a beam project, various coffee machines and free Wi-Fi. Actually, It\'s my plan after retirement. I will run my own company. The small house will be a office of my company. It will support me a place for spending time in day time.It is a perfect plan for me except one thing what I won\'t be young anymore.
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If I can make a plan for weekend what I want to do, and I have abilities to execute the plan. I would buy a small house in country side.
>> If I can make a plan for the weekend, and I have abilities to execute the plan, I would buy a small house in the countryside.
I would go to the house every weekends.
>> I would go to the house every weekend.
I want to spend time alone in the house.
>> I want to spend my time alone in the house.
After having the house, I will live diligently in week days, and then I want to stay alone in every weekend.
>> After having the house, I will live diligently on weekdays, and then I want to stay alone there every weekend.
There are a desktop computer, a beam project, various coffee machines and free Wi-Fi.
>> There should be a desktop computer, a beam project, various coffee machines, and free Wi-Fi.
Actually, It\'s my plan after retirement.
>> Actually, it\'s my plan after retirement.
I will run my own company.
>> Correct.
The small house will be a office of my company.
>> The small house will be the office of my company at the same time.
It will support me a place for spending time in day time.
>> It will support me and would give me a place to have in the day time.
It is a perfect plan for me except one thing what I won\'t be young anymore.
>> It is a perfect plan for me except for one thing, I won\'t be young anymore.
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