How would you recommend treating a cold?
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When we catch a cold, we don\'t need to take medicine. We need to take some rest and drink planty of water. When I visited in Germany, there is on medicine for recovering from the cold. German people just drink hot tea and take vitamins. If we recover from a cold, our bodies know how to overcome it. Even if we get infected, we have no symptoms.
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Excellent work, [이름]ny! Please take note of the corrections given below. It will be a big help with your English fluency.
- Teacher Angela
When we catch a cold, we don\'t need to take medicine.
>> CORRECT
We need to take some rest and drink planty of water.
>> We need to get some rest and drink plenty of water.
When I visited in Germany, there is on medicine for recovering from the cold.
>> When I visited Germany, there was no medicine for recovering from a cold.
German people just drink hot tea and take vitamins.
>> CORRECT
If we recover from a cold, our bodies know how to overcome it.
>> Once we recover from a cold, our bodies already know how to overcome it.
Even if we get infected, we have no symptoms.
>> Even if we get infected, we may have no symptoms.
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