How would you respond to someone who is homeless?
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Actually, I never think much about homeless people.
Because they are the same people as well as us, but except they just don\'t have a home.
I sometimes help them when I saw them.
I think that most people feel that they feel pity for them, but homeless people don\'t think about it and they just live a day.
Nowadays, some of the company hired them to work. There is an increasing rate that homeless people get a job for their living.
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>> CORRECT
Because they are the same people as well as us, but except they just don\'t have a home.
>> They are human like us, but they just don\'t have a home.
>> I sometimes help them when I see them.
>> I think that most people pity them, but homeless people don\'t think about it and just live for the day.
Nowadays, some of the company hired them to work.
>> Nowadays, some companies hire them to work.
There is an increasing rate that homeless people get a job for their living.
>> There is an increasing rate of homeless people getting a job for their living.
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