How would your life be different if you gained more self confidence?

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If I gained more self confidence, I could more focus on what I have to do rather than wasting time in worrying about the failure which does not come to me yet.

>> If I gained more self confidence, I could focus more on what I have to do rather than waste my time in worrying about my upcoming failures.

The longer time for worrying about the consequences becomes, the shorter time for doing something becomes.

>> The longer I worry about the consequences, the shorter the time I have for doing something.

It could be seen as a careful behavior, but I believe it is just a waste of time.

>> Correct!

Thus, I believe having self confidence is essential factor for making my life efficent. 

>> Thus, I believe that having self confidence is an essential factor for an efficient life. 
Second reason why self confidence is needed to me is that it can make my life autonomous.

>> Second reason why I need self confidence is to make my life autonomous.

If I have no confidence in me, I make my decision based on other\'s one.

>> If I have no confidence in me, I make my decision based on someone else\'s.

Actually, it is not my decision so if something goes wrong, I just blame for others and do not try to look back and fix my faults. .

>> Actually, since it\'s not my decision if something goes wrong, I just blame the others. I do not try to look back and fix my faults.

I think it is a shortcut to ruin myself

>> Correct!

Therefore, taking on responsibility for my life and living autonomous by getting self confidence is so important.

>> Therefore, taking on responsibility for my life and living autonomous by being self confident is so important.