How would your life be different without access to technology?
학생이 쓴 원문
After Industrial Revolution, human\'s life style was changed completely.
If I can\'t access any technology, I still live like a my ancestor, I would still farm with cow.
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After Industrial Revolution, human\'s life style was changed completely.
>> After the Industrial Revolution, human lifestyles changed completely.
If I can\'t access any technology, I still live like a my ancestor, I would still farm with cow.
>> If I couldn\'t access any technology, I would live like my ancestors and still farm using cows.
>> After the Industrial Revolution, human lifestyles changed completely.
If I can\'t access any technology, I still live like a my ancestor, I would still farm with cow.
>> If I couldn\'t access any technology, I would live like my ancestors and still farm using cows.
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