How would your life change if you could do whatever you want?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I could do whatever I want I would study art&design. When I’m doing this, I feel happy, but I settled for the reality because it has been an unpromising job and requires economical support.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Judy!
In reality as well, we can do whatever we want only if we maintain balance and boundary. It is never too late to live our unfulfilled dreams. As you study your new major soon, you can watch so many YouTube videos about art and desig,. It will empower your mind and soul.
Thank you for this homework answer! Your sentences are both correct and very meaningful. I shall see you in class soon.
-T. Donna =)
>>Correct!
Or: art and design
When I’m doing this, I feel happy, but I settled for the reality because it has been an unpromising job and requires economical support.
>> Correct!
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