How would your life change if you could manage stress better?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I could cope with my stress, it won\'t have burnout.
Looking back in my life, I always think \" I had to do something
such as studying,making money,housework and single parenting.
I think it would have been better if I did it slowly.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ju Mi! You’ve faced many challenges in life. Taking things more slowly might have helped, and reflecting now can help with stress. ^^ Thank you! See you tomorrow!
~T. Jewel
If I could cope with my stress, it won\'t have burnout.
>>If I could cope with my stress, I wouldn’t have burned out.
Looking back in my life, I always think \" I had to do something such as studying,making money,housework and single parenting.
Looking back in my life, I always think \" I had to do something such as studying,making money,housework and single parenting.
>>Looking back on my life, I always think that I had to do things like studying, earning money, doing housework, and being a single parent.
I think it would have been better if I did it slowly.
>>I think it would have been better if I had done things slowly.
OR
>>I think it would have been better if I had taken my time.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.