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2019-08-13 · 첨삭 강사 James

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1. I would like to remind you that I do not earn --so much money that you do. 2. Mark and Jake are so different in appearance that you would hardly guess that they are twins. 3. In St. Valentine\'s Day my fiance and I went to a famous restaurant. As I had never been in such a luxurious restaurant before as that one, I was fascinated by the beauty of its atmosphere. 4. In order to complete the highway on time, the workers worked as quickly as there was even no time for talking. 5. Even though I\'m very busy, I usually sit at my desk all day. I need more exercise, so I try to walk to and from work as often as I can. 6. He is not like he used to be; he hasn\'t got such much enthusiasm as he once had. 7. Steven did such well in his speech today that he must have rehearsed it many times last week. 8. David spent such an enjoyable vacation in Europe this summer that he plans to return there as soon as he saves enough money. 9. The reunion party wasn\'t such a great success that I\'d expec

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Thank you for this.

- T. James

1. I would like to remind you that I do not earn --so much money that you do.
>>> I would like to remind you that I do not earn as much money as you do.
2. Mark and Jake are so different in appearance that you would hardly guess that they are twins.
>>> CORRECT
3. In St. Valentine\'s Day my fiance and I went to a famous restaurant. As I had never been in such a luxurious restaurant before as that one, I was fascinated by the beauty of its atmosphere.
>>> CORRECT
4. In order to complete the highway on time, the workers worked as quickly as there was even no time for talking.
>>> In order to complete the highway on time, the workers worked so quickly that there was even no time for talking.
5. Even though I\'m very busy, I usually sit at my desk all day. I need more exercise, so I try to walk to and from work as often as I can.
>>> CORRECT
6. He is not like he used to be; he hasn\'t got as much enthusiasm as he once had.
>>> He is not like he used to be; he hasn\'t got such much enthusiasm as he once had.
7. Steven did such well in his speech today that he must have rehearsed it many times last week.
>>> Steven did so well in his speech today that he must have rehearsed it many times last week.
8. David spent such an enjoyable vacation in Europe this summer that he plans to return there as soon as he saves enough money.
>>> CORRECT
9. The reunion party wasn\'t such a great success that I\'d expec

>> The reunion party wasn\'t such a great success as I\'d expected.

 


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