Howework
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Hello Tina!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
I achieved my childhood dream, but patient care wasn\'t as happy as I thought.
>> CORRECT!
So now I have an office job and take care of patients indirectly.
>> So now I have an office job and I take care of patients indirectly.
But This job is boring and I can\'t feel proud myself.
>> But this job is boring and I can\'t feel proud myself.
I want to work in the operating room or recovery room. Because I was exhausted from troubles with patients.
>> I want to work in the operating room or recovery room because I was exhausted from troubles with patients.
That departments take care of the unconscious patients.
>> Those departments take care of the unconscious patients.
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