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Teacher Janice
1. Most working people have fewer hours to give to time-consuming activities of clubs than they used to have, but most people in a small town belong to a club or two.
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One of clubs is likely to be social and benevolent organization, such as Rotary or Elks.
>> One of the clubs is likely to be a social and benevolent organization, such as the Rotary or Elks.
Business people are likely to belong, also to either Kiwanis Club or Lions.
>> Business people are likely to belong, also to either the Kiwanis Club or the Lions.
Such business people\'s organizations may meet as often as once a week in one of private dining rooms of town\'s leading hotel for lunch.
>> Such business people\'s organizations may meet as often as once a week in one of the private dining rooms of the town\'s leading hotel for lunch.
They have good lunch, hear good programs, and continue their fundraising program for a worthy organization, such as a local hospital.
>> They have a good lunch, hear a good program, and continue their fundraising program for a worthy organization, such as a local hospital.
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