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2020-03-19 · 첨삭 강사 Rachel

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Q: Some people like to work at jobs that are exciting and full of new challenges. Other people prefer jobs where the work is routine and predictable. What kind of job would you prefer and why? I prefer to work at jobs that are exciting and full of new challenges. There are some reasons to support my opinion. First, I am sick of routine things easily. If I do the same thing over and over again, I will not feel progressing myself. Second, I can learn a lot and extend my perspective as challenging new things. It will make me more professional. And it is beneficial for me in the long run. Therefore, I will always be in a position to challenge new things.

강사 첨삭

Hi Bo Ram,

I hope things are going well for you these days. Thanks for the response to the homework you were given;

-Rachel

I prefer to work at jobs that are exciting and full of new challenges.
There are some reasons to support my opinion.
First, I am sick of routine things easily. If I do the same thing over and over again, I will not feel progressing myself.

>> correct (acceptable in spoken English)

>> First, I get sick of routine activities easily. If I do the same action repeatedly, I will not feel any progress in myself.
Second, I can learn a lot and extend my perspective as challenging new things. It will make me more professional. And it is beneficial for me in the long run.

>> correct ( we can also use while instead of as or we can also say, as I challenge new adventures)
Therefore, I will always be in a position to challenge new things.

>> correct

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