Hug:)

2022-02-15 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I don\'t know how to love someone unique expression way. But I think best expression is just no talk only hug. Hug is the best expression way. When I very hard my mind or tired, my parents usually do that. And it\'s makes feel so comfortable and relax. Hug is best motion.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ann:)

Hugging makes us calm down all the time. Your parents are very sweet by the way. 

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I don\'t know how to love someone unique expression way.
>> I don\'t know how to uniquely show my love to someone. 

But I think best expression is just no talk only hug.
>>  But I think that the best way is to just hug and not talk. 

Hug is the best expression way.
>> Hugging is the best way to show your love for someone. 

When I very hard my mind or tired, my parents usually do that.
>> When I fee down or tired, my parents usually hug me. 

And it\'s makes feel so comfortable and relax.
>> It makes me feel so comfortable and relaxed. 

Hug is best motion.
>> CORRECT

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