Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think t
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Human activities tend to ruin the ecosystem and natural environment for convenience.
>>Correct.
>>OR: Human activities tend to ruin ecosystem and natural environment for their own convenience.
On-going Human activities are good side on human though that effect negative impact on ecosystem.
>>On-going human actives are for their side but it give negative effect to ecosystem.
Despite Human are trying improve the environment, It is hard to recover ruined ecosystem at once.
>>Human are trying to improve the environment, it is hard to recover a ruined ecosystem at once.
>>(Please make a research how to use the word \"Despite\")
There are so many endangered animals in the world.
>>Correct.
Also environmental destruction and pollution are taken for granted including the lack of energy, global warming and so on.
>>Correct.
I have heard that it takes a lot of time and even century to recover the ecosystem.
>>Correct.
>>I\'ve heard that it takes a lot o time even takes century to recover the ecosystem.
Of course, some actions like plating trees and protecting animals can be taken to bring positive impact for a change.
>>Correct.
But I definitely believe that the first thing is to protect the nature rather than developing technical ways for action.
>>Correct.
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