Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think t

2017-06-26 · 첨삭 강사 Travis

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Human activities tend to ruin the ecosystem and natural environment for convenience. On-going Human activities are good side on human though that effect negative impact on ecosystem. Despite Human are trying improve the environment, It is hard to recover ruined ecosystem at once. There are so many endangered animals in the world. Also environmental destruction and pollution are taken for granted including the lack of energy, global warming and so on. I have heard that it takes a lot of time and even century to recover the ecosystem. Of course, some actions like plating trees and protecting animals can be taken to bring positive impact for a change. But I definitely believe that the first thing is to protect the nature rather than developing technical ways for action.

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Hello [이름]!


I love your answer, as your English teacher I\'m oblige to check your grammar. You getting the correct grammar rule. Some of your statements/sentences are grammatically correct but logically incorrect.


Teacher Travis.

 

Human activities tend to ruin the ecosystem and natural environment for convenience.
>>Correct.

>>OR: Human activities tend to ruin ecosystem and natural environment for their own convenience.
 On-going Human activities are good side on human though that effect negative impact on ecosystem.
>>On-going human actives are for their side but it give negative effect to ecosystem.
Despite Human are trying improve the environment, It is hard to recover ruined ecosystem at once.
>>Human are trying to improve the environment, it is hard to recover a ruined ecosystem at once.

>>(Please make a research how to use the word \"Despite\")
 There are so many endangered animals in the world. 

>>Correct.
 Also environmental destruction and pollution are taken for granted including the lack of energy, global warming and so on.
>>Correct.
I have heard that it takes a lot of time and even century to recover the ecosystem.

>>Correct.

>>I\'ve heard that it takes a lot o time even takes century to recover the ecosystem.
 Of course, some actions like plating trees and protecting animals can be taken to bring positive impact for a change.
>>Correct.
But I definitely believe that the first thing is to protect the nature rather than developing technical ways for action.

>>Correct.

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