Human life
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Humans are always busy with their life. They sometimes feel happy but most of their time feel tired for chasing happiness. What does it mean "live each day" exactly by the way? Humans have to live everyday anyway as long as they don't get died. Does it mean people have to do their best for living every single day? Why can we just enjoy life not struggle with it? I've been thinking about human life for a long time. Every good thing comes after bad things. People know the rules that everything is relative to each other in this world so they endure in spite of going through a hard time praying that bad things turn to good things soon. How sad it is. What if people can only feel happy all the time. I think the earth would be better place than now. We've been developing science by competing fiercely for a great forward of men so the earth seems to be getting better place but I'm not sure if people are truely happy here. People can feel peaceful and happly from nature but we have destroyed it too much. Before it is too late, we had better take care of nature properly and live in a balance with it for happiness of human.
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Hi, Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for writing this essay.
I guess \"living each day\" means learning to be happy on a daily basis even if there are no great reasons.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re living each day to the fullest!
Have a great day!
Take care always.
~Teacher Charry
Humans are always busy with their life. >> Humans are always busy with their lives.
They sometimes feel happy but most of their time feel tired for chasing happiness.
>> They sometimes feel happy but most of the time feel tired for chasing happiness.
What does it mean \"live each day\" exactly by the way?
>> What does it exactly mean when you say, \"live each day\", by the way?
Humans have to live everyday anyway as long as they don\'t get died.
>> [Do you mean]: Humans have to live everyday anyway whether they like it or not.
Does it mean people have to do their best for living every single day?
>> Does it mean people have to do their best to live every single day?
Why can we just enjoy life not struggle with it?
>> Why can we just enjoy life and not struggle with it?
I\'ve been thinking about human life for a long time.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I\'ve been thinking about life for a long time.
Every good thing comes after bad things.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Something good follows after an unfortunate incident.
People know the rules that everything is relative to each other in this world so they endure in spite of going through a hard time praying that bad things turn to good things soon.
>> People know the rules that everything is relative to each other in this world so they endure in spite of going through a hard time praying that bad things will turn to good things soon.
How sad it is.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> It\'s really sad.
What if people can only feel happy all the time.
>> What if people can only feel happy all the time?
I think the earth would be better place than now.
>> I think the earth would be better place than it is now.
We\'ve been developing science by competing fiercely for a great forward of men so the earth seems to be getting better place but I\'m not sure if people are truely happy here.
>> [Do you mean]: We\'ve been developing science by competing fiercely with great and forward-thinking men so the earth seems to be a better place but I\'m not sure if people are truly happy here.
People can feel peaceful and happly from nature but we have destroyed it too much.
>> People can feel peaceful and happy from nature but we have destroyed it too much.
Before it is too late, we had better take care of nature properly and live in a balance with it for happiness of human.
>> Before it is too late, we better take care of nature properly and live in a balance with it for us to be happy.
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