human relationship class 2

Teacher~ It is my homework in human relationship class. It's not important at all but I just want to check my writing. You don't need to be hurry and waste time. Please read it lightly and check! Nowadays, human relationship is very important element in working place and we always interact with others. Therefore, we should develop interpersonal skills to success our business and career. First of all, attractive communication technique is based on every skill. We should listen well when other people say and it is better if you give some response that makes a conversation goes smoothly. Second, it is necessary to improve our sympathy ability. The others may be moved deeply if we endure to understand their feeling and thinking. I have done my best to develop those skills.

This is the second one~ It is my honor to correct this so don\'t worry~ Teacher~ It is my homework in human relationship class. >>Teacher~ It is my homework for human relationship class.  It\'s not important at all but I just want to check my writing. >> It\'s not important at all but I just want you to check my writing. You don\'t need to be hurry and waste time. >>You don\'t need to hurry and waste time checking this. Please read it lightly and check!>>CORRECT!Nowadays, human relationship is very important element in working place and we always interact with others. >>Nowadays, human relationship is a very important element in worplace because always interact with others. Therefore, we should develop interpersonal skills to success our business and career. >>Therefore, we should develop interpersonal skills to succeed in our business and career. First of all, attractive communication technique is based on every skill. >>CORRECT!  We should listen well when other people say and it is better if you give some response that makes a conversation goes smoothly. >>We should listen well when other people talk and it is better if you give some response that makes a conversation go on smoothly.  Second, it is necessary to improve our sympathy ability. >>Second, it is necessary to improve our ability to sympathize. The others may be moved deeply if we endure to understand their feeling and thinking. >>CORRECT! I have done my best to develop those skills. >>CORRECT!