human relationship class

2014-11-03 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

학생이 쓴 원문

Teacher~ It is my homework in human relationship class. It's not important at all but I just want to check my writing. You don't need to be hurry and waste time. Please read it lightly and check! To become more self accepting, I need to establish a long term goal in my life and I’m continuously eager to achieve my goal. To build a more trusting relationship with others, I need to deal with other people not pretentious but sincere. My greatest strength in the area of communication is sympathy skill which I strive to consider the other’s thinking and feeling. To grow in the area of self awareness, I need to read various books related to self awareness and apply contents of those books to my behavior or thinking by reminding. I’m motivated to give my best whenever I look many people who have higher life goal and constantly do their best to achieve it.

강사 첨삭

Ha! Ha! Everything about you shall be considered important, so it is my pleasure to do this~ Thank you very much for trusting me, ha! ha! Good luck on this, [이름]! May you reap great rewards, see you~ Teacher~ It is my homework in human relationship class. >>Teacher~ It is my homework for human relationship class.  It\'s not important at all but I just want to check my writing. >> It\'s not important at all but I just want you to check my writing. You don\'t need to be hurry and waste time. >>You don\'t need to hurry and waste time checking this. Please read it lightly and check!>>CORRECT!To become more self accepting, I need to establish a long term goal in my life and I’m continuously eager to achieve my goal.>>To become more self accepting, I need to establish a long-term goal in my life and I\'m continuously eager to achieve my goal.To build a more trusting relationship with others, I need to deal with other people not pretentious but sincere.>>To build a more trusting relationship with others, I need to deal with other people sincerely, without any pretentions.My greatest strength in the area of communication is sympathy skill which I strive to consider the other’s thinking and feeling.>>My greatest strength in the area of communication is sympathizing, in which I strive to consider others\' thinking and feeling.To grow in the area of self awareness, I need to read various books related to self awareness and apply contents of those books to my behavior or thinking by reminding.>>To grow in the area of self awareness, I need to read various books related to self awareness and apply the contents of those books to my behavior or thinking.I’m motivated to give my best whenever I look many people who have higher life goal and constantly do their best to achieve it. >>I\'m motivated to give my best whenever I look at many people who have a higher life goal and constantly do their best to achieve it.  

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