human right
학생이 쓴 원문
It is very sad that people\'s way of solving problems is not thriugh communicate and negociatie but through petition and sue.
I know the reason that a chid below 10 years old ban from VIP resting area.
It\'s not discriminate. We should not solve legal provisions.
Parent\'s rasie their children rude and badly.
Such children make a fuss , crying and nosiy even in the VIP area.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Ms.[이름]!
I guess parents need also to attend \"smart parenting\" programs so they know that their child is not their world. If they insist on doing that, they may be raising a weak and a dependent child.
Thanks for today!
Aki~
It is very sad that people\'s way of solving problems is not thriugh communicate and negociatie but through petition and sue.
>>> It is very sad that people\'s way of solving problems is not through communication and negotiation but through petition and sue.
I know the reason that a chid below 10 years old ban from VIP resting area.
>>> I know the reason that a child below 10 years old is banned from the VIP resting area.
It\'s not discriminate. We should not solve legal provisions.
>>> CORRECT!
Parent\'s rasie their children rude and badly.
>>> Parents raise their children rudely and badly.
Such children make a fuss , crying and nosiy even in the VIP area.
>>> Such children make a fuss, crying, and are noisy even in the VIP area.
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