Husband's Wish

2015-10-02 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

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A husband prayed God to change his body to his wife, because he thought that he worked hard every day while his wife is playing at home doing nothing. God accepted his wish and made him become his wife in the next morning. As she woke up, she had to cook as quickly as possible, woke up her children and had them to have breakfast, made a lunch box, washed the dishes, did laundry, cleaned the room, went to market and bought lots of things, waited for their children coming back from school, made a snack for them, and did the ironing. In the afternoon, she had to struggle with her children to help them do homework and prepared for dinner. All day long, she had no time to take a rest. In the evening, she had to wash dishes, sort out the laundry, got their children go to bed, but it hadn't finished. She was so utterly worn out and went to bed, but she had to love her husband like other day. Next morning as soon as she woke up, she prayed God again to come back to man saying I was so stupid.

강사 첨삭

Dear [Name]. [이름],

 

Happy Friday! ^.^

 

The moral lesson of the story is to be contented of what we have and what we are.

Furthermore, we shouldn\'t ask to be someone else, because we are already lucky being in ourselves.

Contentment is hard to achieve, but we need to see everything around us to understand it.

 

By the way, thank you for the sharing! ^^

However, see the corrections and suggestion below carefully.

 

That\'s all for now! ^^

Happy reading! ^^,

Have a great weekend! ^^.

See you on Monday! ^.^

 

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

 

 

A husband prayed God to change his body to his wife, because he thought that he worked hard every day while his wife is playing at home doing nothing.

>> A husband prayed to God to change his body to his wife, because he thought that he worked hard every day while his wife played at home doing nothing.

God accepted his wish and made him become his wife in the next morning.

>> CORRECT!

As she woke up, she had to cook as quickly as possible, woke up her children and had them to have breakfast, made a lunch box, washed the dishes, did laundry, cleaned the room, went to market and bought lots of things, waited for their children coming back from school, made a snack for them, and did the ironing.

>> As she woke up, she had to cook as quickly as possible, woke up her children and had them to have breakfast, made a lunch box, washed the dishes, did the laundry, cleaned the room, went to the market and bought lots of things, waited for their children coming back from school, made a snack for them, and did the ironing.

In the afternoon, she had to struggle with her children to help them do homework and prepared for dinner.

>> CORRECT!

All day long, she had no time to take a rest.

>> CORRECT!

In the evening, she had to wash dishes, sort out the laundry, got their children go to bed, but it hadn\'t finished.

>> CORRECT!

She was so utterly worn out and went to bed, but she had to love her husband like other day.

>> She was so utterly worn out and went to bed, but she had to love her husband like the other days.

Next morning as soon as she woke up, she prayed God again to come back to man saying I was so stupid.

>> The next morning, as soon as she woke up, she prayed to God again to make him go back to normal saying, \"I was so stupid.\"

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