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2017-12-21 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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Tell the story of your favorite cartoon. Answer in 5 sentences or more My favorite cartoon is crowd pedal. Because I like bike very much, and main character is so funny. In crowd pedal, main character sing a song like "Hime Hime". Last, my favorite character is 'Imaizumi' because when he falter he didn't submit.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

You did your homework really quickly.

Thank you for being so diligent.

Take note of the corrections below.

Merry Christmas!

~~ Teacher Sharon

My favorite cartoon is crowd pedal.

>> My favorite cartoon is entitled, \"Crowd Pedal.\"

Because I like bike very much,

>> I like it because bicycles are my favorite.
and main character is so funny.

>> The main character in the story is very funny.
In crowd pedal, main character sing a song like \"Hime Hime\".

>> In the show, the main characters sing songs like \"Hime Hime.\"
Last, my favorite character is \'Imaizumi\' because when he falter he didn\'t submit.

>> Lastly, may favorite character is Imaizumi because he never surrenders even if he gets weak.

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