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2026-01-25 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

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When I had dated with ex girlfriend, we typically went Dutch treat. Honestly, I really wanted to give her many things like food, gift, cosmetics, and so on, but I didn\'t. I think many student couple in Korea have went Dutch treat. But guys usually pay for food when dating first time. I asked some Japanese guys about that, and they said it\'s same. I also asked some Chinese guys about it, and they said we usually pay when we are dating. It\'s a culture in China. So, one of my Chinese friends said that I was broke up last month, because I was shame when I go on a date with my friend\'s couple. They always did the guys paid, but he didn\'t because he is a undergraduate student and doesn\'t have a lot of money. In normal situation, not dating, Dutch treat is a very normal thing in Korea and Japan. Especially in Japan, many restaurants are possible to go Dutch treat. It\'s so convenient. In Korea, we usually make one of us pay and last of us send money to them later.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름] [이름]!

This is quite interesting. Truth be told, being a student and dating could be financially challenging. This is the reason whey I worked part time while studying in the university decades ago.

Dutch treat is the way for couples to be able to shoulder their finances according to their means. This is be the norm if both of you have priorities in terms of academic spending.

Regardless of race, for young people like you, Dutch treat is reasonable and accepted.

Below, you wrote a lengthy and substantial composition. The gramma suggestions contain pluralized nouns, word insertions, diction, among others. Please study them well. Great work!

See you tomorrow.

-T. Donna~

When I had dated with ex girlfriend, we typically went Dutch treat.
Honestly, I really wanted to give her many things like food, gift, cosmetics, and so on, but I didn\'t.
>>> When I had dated with (my/an) ex girlfriend, we typically went Dutch treat.
Honestly, I really wanted to give her many things like food, gifts, cosmetics, and so on, but I didn\'t.

I think many student couple in Korea have went Dutch treat.
But guys usually pay for food when dating first time.
>>> I think many student couples in Korea have went Dutch treat.
But guys usually pay for food when dating first time.

I asked some Japanese guys about that, and they said it\'s same.
I also asked some Chinese guys about it, and they said we usually pay when we are dating. It\'s a culture in China.
>>> I asked some Japanese guys about that, and they said it\'s the same.
I also asked some Chinese guys about it, and they said we usually pay when we are dating. It\'s a culture in China.

So, one of my Chinese friends said that I was broke up last month, because I was shame when I go on a date with my friend\'s couple.
They always did the guys paid, but he didn\'t because he is a undergraduate student and doesn\'t have a lot of money.
>>> So, one of my Chinese friends said that he broke up with his girlfriend last month, because he was ashamed when he goes on a date with her.
They always did the guys paid, but he didn\'t because he is a undergraduate student and doesn\'t have a lot of money.

In normal situation, not dating, Dutch treat is a very normal thing in Korea and Japan. Especially in Japan, many restaurants are possible to go Dutch treat. It\'s so convenient. In Korea, we usually make one of us pay and last of us send money to them later.
>>> In a normal situation, not dating, Dutch treat is a very normal thing in Korea and Japan. Especially in Japan, many restaurants are possible to go on a Dutch treat. It\'s so convenient. In Korea, we usually make one of us pay and last of us send money to them later.

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