HW 1.30
학생이 쓴 원문
Almost Japanese people ride a bike every day, because transportation fees are so expensive.
They are very polite when meeting their senior.
They are into baseball, so talk a lot about baseball. And in Hiroshima, almost people are into Hiroshima Carps.
Many of restaurants have goods and signs about this team.
They have a good manner about driving. I don\'t heard any horn sound from coming here.
It\'s long to take a license and it\'s more difficult than Korea.
They don\'t give up their seat to an elderly person on the train or bus. I heard that elderly people also don\'t want this.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] [이름]!
The culture of biking is no surprise for a country like Japan. They have a pleasant environment and conducive biking lanes where bikers can freely and safely move.
As you lived in this place for a very long time, you have observed, lived, and imbibed some of their daily lives\' aspects in one way or another. Above all, manners and respect are two things you need to acculturate yourself with in another country.
Kindly read and analyze my grammar suggestions. Well done!
See you.
-T. Donna~
They are very polite when meeting their senior.
>>> Almost all Japanese people ride a bike every day because transportation fees are so expensive.
They are very polite when meeting their seniors.
They are into baseball, so talk a lot about baseball. And in Hiroshima, almost people are into Hiroshima Carps.
Many of restaurants have goods and signs about this team.
They are very polite when meeting their seniors.
They are into baseball, so talk a lot about baseball. And in Hiroshima, almost people are into Hiroshima Carps.
Many of restaurants have goods and signs about this team.
>>> They have a good manner about driving. I don\'t heard any horn sound from coming here.
It\'s long to take a license and it\'s more difficult than Korea.
They don\'t give up their seat to an elderly person on the train or bus. I heard that elderly people also don\'t want this.
It\'s long to take a license and it\'s more difficult than Korea.
They don\'t give up their seat to an elderly person on the train or bus. I heard that elderly people also don\'t want this.
>>> They have good manners in driving. I didn\'t hear any honking sound coming from here.
It\'s long to take a license and it\'s more difficult than Korea.They don\'t give up their seats to an elderly person on the train or bus. I heard that elderly people also don\'t want this.
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