HW
학생이 쓴 원문
honestly, in my opinion, I don\'t like them and I don\'t want to hang out with them.
Because people who have vices do crimes and many people of them become criminals and gangs.
So if I hang out with them I will be like them.
For these reasons, I never like them.
강사 첨삭
Good late afternoon [이름]!
Truly, birds with the same feather flock together. That is the same with hanging out with goons. Choose your friends wisely and develop meaningful hobbies.
See you tomorrow then.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
Or: Honestly (Capital letter H)
Because people who have vices do crimes and many people of them become criminals and gangs.
>> People who have vices do crimes and many people like them become criminals and gangs.
So if I hang out with them I will be like them.
>> Correct!
For these reasons, I never like them.
>> Correct!
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