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Of coures, I believe that stugying in an international school and english kindergarden makes chilidren to be better than children who went to normal school in terms of English.
Usually an internatuinal school and Engilish kindergarden\'s tution is more expensive than a normal school. So, there are high quaility education circumstance and support. It makes diffrences of start line. However I think that government must not ban those education. Because it is foolish to pursue durmbing down for equaility. The important thing is to provide an average education for everyone.
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Hello [이름],
Thank you for taking time to answer this question. It only proves that you really wanted to improve in your English skill. Please do check and take note of the corrections for your improvement. I hope it helped you.
Keep up the good work!
Sincerely,
Teacher Annie (^^)
Of coures, I believe that stugying in an international school and english kindergarden makes chilidren to be better than children who went to normal school in terms of English.
>>> Of course, I believe that studying in an international school and English kindergarten makes children better than those who went to normal school in terms of English.
Usually an internatuinal school and Engilish kindergarden\'s tution is more expensive than a normal school.
>>> Usually an international school and English kindergarten\'s tuition is more expensive than a normal school.
So, there are high quaility education circumstance and support.
>>> So, it\'s expected to have a high-quality education circumstance and support.
It makes diffrences of start line.
>>> It makes the differences of the starting line in English acquisition.
However I think that government must not ban those education. Because it is foolish to pursue durmbing down for equaility.
>>> However I think that the government must not ban that education because it is foolish to pursue dumbing down for equality.
The important thing is to provide an average education for everyone.
>>> CORRECT
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